Alone

• Artist: Polly Odd
• Description: Just another poem I wrote. Comment if you like? I take critisizm pretty well, too. I know it's not my best.
• Date: 02/10/2009
• Tags: alone

Alone

Who am I?
I am nice and smart
But you tore my world apart
When you said goodbye
And all you ever did was lie

You took my heart
F***ing ripped it two
And shreaded it from there
It was already in a million pieces, so what could I do?

I have to fit the pieces back together
And that'll take a while
But as I sit here and cry my eyes out
All you do is smile

I don't cut my wrists
No, I refuse to cut over you
But my pain must go somewhere
But my words for you are few

Alone is where I am
Alone is where I'll be
So leave me now, you jerk
And let me be free

Comments

[Nah Elle]

wow dude that's awesome, it would make a really good rock song, im always writing music and that right there my friend is a winner, awesome job!!

[tjenator]

kewl! although the cutting part is a little out of the whole rythym, and the f**king part disrupts the serene sad mood the whole thing puts on.

[ll Tears of Joy ll]

Are you kidding?
Its awesome!
You are pretty talented

[xX _56AcE_Babii_14 Xx]

wow ur really good