Warped and Twisted

• Artist: Dhampir Carden
• Description: I think it explains itself. As with my other ones I ask that you please comment and let me know what you think. If you would like to discuss them further please send me a message as I am always willing to explain and discuss. please do not send me a message if you are only going to negatively criticize me and my personal feelings that I share in my poetry. Thank you for taking the time to read. If you like them please share them with others, and please vote for them.
• Date: 02/12/2009
• Tags: warped twisted

Harsh words and violent blows,
Hidden secrets nobody knows.
Eyes are open, hands are fisted.
Deep inside I'm warped and twisted.

So many tricks and so many lies.
Too many whens and too many whys,
Nobody's special and nobody gifted,
I'm just me, warped and twisted.

Sleeping awake and choking on a dream,
Listening loudly to a silent scream.
Call my mind the number's unlisted,
Lost in someone so warped and twisted.

On my knees, alive but dead,
Look and the invisible blood I've bled.
I'm not gone, my mind has drifted,
Don't expect much, I'm warped and twisted.

Burnt out, wasted, empty and hollow,
Today's just yesterdays tomorrow.
The sun died out, the ashes sifted,
I'm still here, warped and twisted.

Comments

[HalfHorizonOfHope]

This is awesome!

[Shadow_Kissed81]

thats really something,its sad but i like it 5/5

[ExSoldier13]

amazing simply amazing

[catObSeSsIoN]

I LOVE IT!

Amazing. You have a natural gift for poetry.

And Rhyming.

When I try to make my poems rhyme, I jsut can't get the same rythym. So my poems don't come out that well, but you have that gift that I do not. And you use it well. I love this poem!

[anime_freak_kouga]

I love it. It's really good.

[i-cookie-monster8]

awwww it makes me sad 5/5