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In times to Come
Will love cease to Be
Become a Myth
Instead of Reality
- by Your Next Addiction |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/18/2009 |
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- Title: In times to come
- Artist: Your Next Addiction
- Description: A very short poem about love.
- Date: 02/18/2009
- Tags: times come
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Kibroth - 02/24/2009
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Short and sweet, but suprisingly well written. 5/5
Cheers,
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- libraryprincess - 02/23/2009
- its hard to come by true love but you shouldn't write it off so quickly. i like how you didn't make the poem complicated. it is written the way love is. it either is true or not true no in between.
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- Laura_3226 - 02/22/2009
- A little to short..
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- BiggieSmall123 - 02/22/2009
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I agree with both Sunafire && Alitare.
lol.
It's good, mysterious but it is too short.
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- Sunafire - 02/22/2009
- I think the below is slightly too harsh. I love the rhyming going on there, and simple is never bad, I can see you have alot of potential smile
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 02/21/2009
- Pretty bland and unimaginative. Short, weak, and cliche.
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