Sweet Addiction

• Artist: midfieldgrits17
• Description:
• Date: 02/19/2009
• Tags: sweet addiction love

I feel complete when I look into your amiable eyes
It feels like I've known you my entire life
Your gaze holds me in place, holds me in elation
I can't get enough, can't get enough of this fixation

Hold me in your arms longer, don't let go
As you touch my arm tenderly, moving real slow
I simply melt, my legs becoming like jello
Utterly soothing, it makes me mellow

Your luscious scent envelopes my being
I don't know why, but it feels so freeing
The smell of you skin, it feels like home
It's still here when you leave and I'm all alone

The dulcet sound of your voice brings so much joy
That nightly phone call is something I thoroughly enjoy
When you light-heartedly chuckle , I am aglow
It's something I live for, do you know

Perhaps my favorite, your delectable kiss
Something that brings me exuberant bliss
Of all the enslavements, possibly the most missed
I don't believe a sweeter addiction exists

Comments

[iamasam]

okay first off i think Alitare's comment was a lil harsh. i do agree that stanza 2 is my least favorite stanza but it doesn't "suck". i think the thing about that section is the wording. i'm very impressed with the vocabulary in the rest of the poem not to mention the imaging is great. i have read some of this person's poetry and its right up there with all her other great work.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Augh. This poem is so great except for stanza two. If you take out stanza two, this is amazing. Just, compared to everything else, stanza two sucks. 4/5.