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Bleeding from the wounds i made gushing from the veins
Like a waterfall it flows splashing on the floor
Only small red drops now dripping from your gaping flesh
Oh so much was there before now there nothing left
Dying like that it seems was to you so painful
- by Stormy Daniels |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/22/2009 |
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- Title: Blood
- Artist: Stormy Daniels
- Description: pretty gory it just comes to my head lol anyway have...fun ?lol my style is kinda acrostic but not quite lol i dunno
- Date: 02/22/2009
- Tags: blood
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Tattered Faerie Wings - 02/27/2009
- I like it very much!! ^_^
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- Yasha Ninja - 02/25/2009
- that was pretty good. 4/5
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- _Roooose_ - 02/22/2009
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^ _ ^ I like.
The ending was a bit...abrupt though.
2nd Line: Could possibly change to ''splashing crimson stains'', so it rhymes with veins .
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- Stormy Daniels - 02/22/2009
- plz comment lol im pretty new so critisism would be nice
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