the 3 words of love

• Artist: thehealingcow
• Description: a love poem for all to enjoy and ponder the feelings it brings
• Date: 02/26/2009
• Tags: words love

3 words to bring comfusion
3 words so hard to say, yet those words hold such power
3 words to hold life in a sway

3 words used all the time
wether in song, story, or rhyme
3 words of comfort yet also
words of pain

3 words to bring about closeness
3 words to make you wonder why
3 words of attachment
said in action or said in word

how can these 3 words
arouse some yet
also anger others
why within these words
can such hatred breed

3 words to change
how others percieve you
either said to the same
or to the other

3 words so easy yet so hard
3 words to hold life of a pair
3 words of love
3 words of hate
3 words saying " i love you"

Comments

[thehealingcow]

thanks for the advice

[such a silly woman]

it's good but you need to work on the repitition, and spell out three instead it makes it a more smooth piece. btw i'm always looking for some advice with my poems take a look if you like=)