Silence

• Artist: angeldiane
• Description: I wrote this for a local contest a week ago. Results won't be back til the 15th so I thought I'd share it with Gaia and get some feedback.
  Any comment would be greatly appreciated!! :D
  And the third stanza was referring to the Holocaust. );
• Date: 03/04/2009
• Tags: silence

Glances and shuffling of papers,
Whispers of test answers,
The cheating left untold,
Silence is the worst

Bruises and specks of bloods,
Condescending remarks ring,
The bullying continued,
Silence is the worst.

Gray skies and gray outlooks,
Screams of millions,
The killing left ignored,
Silence is the worst.

Silence is deafening.

Comments

[pumpkinmilk]

It sounds more like words then poetry.