Can it be love?

• Artist: Dark_Aeris-chan
• Description: Theres a guy I really like and ive never felt this way before. he only lives an hour away yet he still cant come see me. Him and i can't do long distance beacuse it would kill us even more.. but nonetheless we have feeligns for eachother. I wrote this yesterday. I could finally dig down deep into my feelings.
  
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• Date: 03/08/2009
• Tags: love

So close yet so far away
I feel for you, you feel for me
Our feelings, they are the same

I wish I may, I wish I might
Will I ever get to see you tonight?

It kills me inside
my heart keeps acheing
its yours for the taking
just give it a try

These feelings, will they ever go away
or are they here to stay?
I don't know and I don't care
you know me so much better than them I'm well aware

So ill wait for you
whatever it takes
it's worth the wait
this wont be my biggest mistake

You feel for me and i feel for you
lets stay this way
so our feelings will never fade away

Comments

[Chun-Li_fighter]

It may need some work, but it's nice,
try to pass down the felling ever more when you write, research the words a bit more, but it's still pretty good!

[Cutiepie6661]

thats so sweet

[nikkyp533]

I love it and i have the same thing, except we're giving long distance a shot, I haven't seen him in a year, he lives an hour away, anyway, love the song it's awesome! 5/5

[Jazzy104_music]

It's good, but i think u need to add more description...I don't know...I'm not really into poetry but i would be more interested if u didn't repeat so much. But it was good though..

[regular jones]

mmmm, its ok not my fav