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Victimized, I sit here weeping softly, to myself
wondering if there is someone else
to help me feel, just a little better
I know, that you're just across the street
and I keep on hoping that we'll meet
I just can't help but be caught up in you
As I drift onto the bus, in the morning
I sit down by myself, and without warning
I didn't know you came on here before
Your face, fascinating, yet so simple
your smi – I – I – I – le, with dimples
you need, not be; complicated . . .
hell, that's overrated
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Every time I see your smiling faayaayaayaace
I stop dead, looking for a trace
of desire in your eyes
hoping that you'll want, want to love me
*
Could it be true?
Could you really need me too?
I don't know,
I would hope so
I can hear them walking by
saying you should try
to win me overrr
*
Every time I see your smiling faayaayaayaace
I stop dead, looking for a trace
of desire in your eyes
hoping that you'll want, want to love me
*
As the hair falls in your face
I lean over to put it back in place
you touch my arm, my heart skips a beat
We look into each other's eyes
we were both mesmerized
and captured, by the moment
We look to each other
as if there was no other
in the room
He says to me,”I never realized before, but you're all I'm looking for”
as a burst of joy is contained within me forevermore
and I reply softly,
“So you're the one I'm looking for
the one I knew would always be there and the one I would adore
thank you for being my everything,
and being so inspiring”
So now I know that your smile will be my joy
and your desire is my toy
as long as I am in your arms, and loved.
- by xninjaduckiesx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/12/2009 |
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- Title: With Love
- Artist: xninjaduckiesx
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Description:
i wrote this song for a very special kid who i love & adore ;] <3
please feel free to comment & please rate!
thank you so much, i would love the support/criticism.
<3 KaTiE / xninjaduckiesx <3 - Date: 03/12/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ruroukenluver13 - 04/10/2009
- i think it's cute and sweet the only thing is i think it would be better if sylables were more evenly matched
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- irkd - 03/13/2009
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"you need, not be; complicated . . .
hell, that's overrated"
This caught my attention. Cute, and to the point. I feel that the rest of the poem is a little bland, but you get better by practice. So good luck! - Report As Spam