Last Breath

• Artist: knightowl23
• Description: This is a poem that I wrote one day that I was really upset. It is somewhat of an "emo" poem but I think that it is one of my best. Thanks for voteing!! :P
• Date: 03/13/2009
• Tags: last breath suicide cutting

Last Breath
Crimson rubies falling from my wrist
Salted dimonds falling from my face
With a razor blade I make a new cut
More dimonds
More rubies
There is a light but I do not go to it
For it is not the light of heaven
But the darkness of hell
Calling my name, whispering to me
More dimonds
More rubies
I don't want to listen anymore
More dimonds
More rubies
Last Breath

Comments

[spoocks96]

wow thats exactly how i feel on the inside

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

wow, that's goood! I have a poem called Last Breath too! I also have the same hair as you, and i write the same style. Are you my twin?

[liilyann]

this is a good poem it remindsd me of a quote i found on the internet somewere

[Hageboutaizen]

Filled with emotion! Fantastic work, but do not get so concerned with genre and claim it to be "emo." If you are really that concerned with it, read some Edgar Allen Poe. He was the father of horror, not "emo." ^_^