- The light came forth when things were bleak,to pierce the absolute darkness and become the wings.The cold sun beat down on me,my freedom would not be tamed,the mirror reflected the miraculous might that began when the mask covering my soul was removed.Pierce through the darkness as your dying,keep shaping the coming era,let your heart be free of desire,fly on endlessly in the might of the midnight sun. 3nodding
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- | Submitted on 03/13/2009 |
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- Title: midnight sun
- Artist: AnimeCrazy4Ever
- Description: u know what they say! 3rd times the charm so here goes another try! PLEASE COMMENT AND RATE!
- Date: 03/13/2009
- Tags: midnightsun
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ElementalDragonBlue - 05/26/2009
- The use of words to paint a picture is beautiful. This poem is in paragraph form. I wish you were in my poetry class my classmates would really enjoy this piece of work. Keep writing Mikuru I can't wait to read your next piece.
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- Raphael von Koeber - 03/19/2009
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Poetry doesn't need to rhyme to be a poem, and not all writings are poems either. I like it just the way it is Mikuru.
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- Dark_Aeris-chan - 03/14/2009
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very good. I love he imagery. Try o make i rhyme a ilttle more
~Paige~ - Report As Spam
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