Going Under

• Artist: ashtastetherainbow
• Description: This is about a girl ready to fall apart.
• Date: 03/17/2009
• Tags: going under

Rainbow socks and colored scarfs-
It's a wonder she's a wonder
when every action yields a blunder
and bruised knees
turn to bruised eyes,
and she can't disguise
her pain with happy shades-
of blue, and red, and gray.
Black t-shirts and black eyes
lead to questions that lead to lies.
And it's a wonder she's a wonder
when her whole world's going under.

Comments

[XxNaruto_Fanatic587xX]

ahh i love it, it sad though... good job 5/5

[SmithyMoogahogin]

its sooo sad

[XallXaloneXbrokenX]

I like it xD relatable. Well written, you should try and add more to it (not that it isn't already brilliant)XD