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As the eagle flies
and the wolf runs
I live my days
one by one
- by Redwolf216 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/18/2009 |
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- Title: LIfe
- Artist: Redwolf216
- Description: a short simple poem
- Date: 03/18/2009
- Tags: life
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Aigyou Katsumi-Chan - 03/19/2009
- I agree with Mischevieous Takaton. Short and sweet, but the words are still able to paint a picture. Haiku is awesome, so you should definitely try it sometime. You'd be a natural at it. =)
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- gghunny - 03/18/2009
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sounds kind of nice!
you know, it's almost a haiku.
if you had added one more one syllable word, it would have been one!
still, for so few words, the imagery is still powerful... - Report As Spam
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