fainting pleasure

• Artist: ruroukenluver13
• Description: think about the feelings as u read in comparison to wat i actually wrote. how does it relate? i hope u can figure it out
• Date: 03/20/2009
• Tags: fainting pleasure

my legs are weak
as u shimmer by
the shining light
in my dark sky
my breath escapes
into the sea
the bubble
tht escapes my lips
as i drown in the dark abyss
of a never ending feeling
it makes my knees weak
and takes my breath away
and i want tht feeling
to never go away

Comments

[Jinx Clover]

It's a good and really cool poem. I like this one too! wink