Invisible

• Artist: oceanbreeze5
• Description: Yes, i know its not the best poem in the world but, i decided to give it a try.
  This can probally relate to many people out there when your crush walks by. =]
  so if u don't like it thats cool, but i would like your honest opinions so i can make it better. thank you
• Date: 03/21/2009
• Tags: invisible

Invisible

You pass me by in the hall,
and you hardly notice me at all,
You belive she is the perfect one for you,
I for one know thats not true.
I know you better, I even wrote you a letter.
But you still didnt see
that your the one for me.
Just give me a chance,
not just one glance.
I can gurantee
that if you really see,
I will be the perfect one for you.
And you for me too.

Comments

[NakedJack]

Do original poems exist anymore? The rhyming is nice. There is nothing being said, and it is the 100th invisible poem on gaia. If you would have said something, made a statement, presented an idea, then it wouldn't have mattered. You didn't though. Write for reasons more than wanting praise. Tell me something, you have the stage, don't waste it.

[4ever_lost in_ ur eyes]

Woot! great poem! nice one =]