Remembering

• Artist: Thorn Of The Sky
• Description: I poem I wrote today in class. I was thinking about war and how so many people were lost.
  I hope you enjoy it,and that it gives you a chance to think about it!
• Date: 03/27/2009
• Tags: remembering

Remember all things,
Happy to be free,
Sad to see,
All the men who weren't to be.

Remember hope to see,
Your loved ones marching free,
Always sad to see,
The ones that lost.

Remember that terror that shook within!!!
To see the blood in battle!!!
To hear the cry of defeat...

Remember all the loved ones,
Marching off to war.
Remember all your tears,
As you see no ones here.

Comments

[Haiizel Nut]

thanks for you comment <3 I love this poem alot!!! haha it all rymes at the end like mine. Cool-ness! but Its short but really good. : )

[MustangSkye]

Made me stop and think about all those over there fighting, the loved ones here at home, and the ones who don't make it back. Thank you. <3

[UltimateBubbleLove]

It is amazing. So sad and deep yet amazing!

[Asking]

Really nice... started thinking about the battle and the heros marching off to war, then at the end the emptiness when they didn't come home. sad

[Thorn Of The Sky]

Thank you both! I have a lot more but I think this one was my best out of those.

[red_blossom12]

that was awesome. i love all the details in it that made me think about it for a moment.

[Todd tha kidd]

best poem ive read