this is a song i made up plz..

• Artist: johanaX_X
• Description: plz enjoy
• Date: 03/27/2009
• Tags: song made

*once a girl left her guy then she was on the road but she hitched a ride from a stranger he was 20 i was 17 i was not goin the way i wanted to aww ohhhh i never saw my ma or pa ever never again ever she was forced to steal aww ohhh no no she found out he was bad she snuck away* ohhhh aww she was livin on prayer wahhh livin on a prayer
take my hand and well make it i swear wahhhhhh livin on prayer i hope my love stays here fore ever more wahhhhh livin on a prayer.............

Comments

[xxYOUR-WORST-NIGHTMERExx]

what thats just a sad exuse 4 a song i totally agree with the ppl below sad

[museIndian]

I so agree!!! That's not fair to rip off someone else's song!!

[chyeahh the great]

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[chyeahh the great]

or you write a song about death, lyk how you felt when sumone died... or you write a song about how you wish that you could stop all the pain and take ur own lyfe cuz it hurts so much... you write a song cuz it comes to you suddenly... you dont take other ppls hard work and call it our own.... just dont.... its not worth the truble

[chyeahh the great]

ok no offence... actually yeah.... take offence by it... this song sucks ballz! its crap! i cant find a tune to it! and youve taken lyrics from another song! thats illegal!!! dude ive been writing songes for almost 11 years!!!! this isnt a song! its a sad excuse for a song... a song is something you write from EXPERIENCE!!!! lyk a love song... you write it cuz it happend to you... cuz you broke up and thats how you felt,,, or you found this person and you thinktheyre the one....

[johanaX_X]

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[Hidariude]

The hook was already used by Bon Jovi. Listen to it, take another stab at it and you may have a good remake/cover.