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WHY? eek
Why did u choose me?
why did you ask me?
was this a joke?
a joke simply to humiliate me,and get my hopes up?
I know were different!
I need help
you live life.
Inside i know your cruel!
But tell me why u choose me and not anyone else?
theres more to life than dances and romances
BUT YOU REVOLVE ON LIES!
I only ask that next time you want me,
dont send your minions,
just tell me how you really feel.
why me?
why did u ask me to become your boyfriend,
even though all these years we never spoke more than two sentences.
WHY?
- by Hot pink Killer07 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/02/2009 |
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- Title: Why?
- Artist: Hot pink Killer07
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Description:
She asked me to be.
she ridiculed me.
Story of brianna's question:plz comment - Date: 04/02/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- 290DarkStars - 04/07/2009
- Man, like the story... but why is this in poety? I can feel the rythem... but not enough to put it into poetry... Please try to give it more rythem with punctuation and stanzas.... and the meaning is a good one... but too bitter to swollow unless you change it up a little... I'm sorry but for me, this makes no sence. my bad for that.
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- DeCrazySheep - 04/05/2009
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GAH! More smilely faces!
Your GOOD man, you don't need them to help express anything!
I'm begging you too keep up the good work.
Just for the love of langauge, no more smilely faces! - Report As Spam
- Hot pink Killer07 - 04/02/2009
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thanks
i thought this one want that good smile - Report As Spam
- jessicaj23 - 04/02/2009
- Awesome, you should write more...
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