Fragile Child

• Artist: Lil Floof
• Description: This is a poem I wrote on October 29, 2003. It's about me!
• Date: 04/05/2009
• Tags: fragile child

A fragile child
Sitting all alone
In a world that is wild
She's all skin and bone

Her brother called her glass
For she was fragile like it
She would sit alone in class
It took very little just to break her a bit

She fell in love
She cared for him with all her heart
He was in her dreams above
And even more when she had to part

When she had to move away
She sat alone and cried
Wishing a lot in every way
That she didn't have to say good-bye

Still a fragile child now
She has nothing to gain
Wishing to go with the flow
Does anyone care about her pain?

Emotions that I can't explain
Wishing to run away
To go somewhere and complain
Or to just have fun and play

Does anyone care about me?
Does anyone care about my pain?
I want to run and be free
For there is nothing that I can gain

For I am that fragile little girl
My brother was the one that called me glass
All alone in this cruel world
And her disrespectful, bad class

Still a fragile child
Trying to stay strong
The pain and suffering becoming mild
In the world that is wrong

By: Kaitlin
October 29, 2003

Comments

[bobthehobbe]

Very, very good a little depressing but all together good.Rather long which I liked but not overboard where it takes 3hrs to read but long enough to say what you want without seeming wordy and told a good story. 5/5 smile

[swisscheeseluvr123]

U MADE ME CRY! ;_;
yes but in a good way my friend ^.^
lovely~

[Tomomi Tsubaki]

That was a very depressing poem! The insight is great and I wish you luck with the rest of your life.

[yukifangurl31295]

Wow, that was such a touching poem, it really is sad . . . Um, how do I put poems in the arenas?