Ditched

• Artist: 290DarkStars
• Description: I wrote this when I felt depressed about not having any friends to hang out with, I guss i forced myself to cheer up.
  I apologise for its choppyness-ness. But I must remember meh vow,
  Post all of ya poetry on Gaia.
  
• Date: 04/06/2009
• Tags: ditched

I cannot be healed,
by the wound that my friends made.
They left me here alone,
when all of them could have stayed.

In order to be accepted,
I must hide who I am.
If I reveal who I am,
they'd leave my life to damn.

My friends scold me,
in every decision that I make.
The dissect everything that I say,
and make me feel fake.

But my FRIEND won't leave me,
he will stand by me through thick n' thin.
We know each other's faults,
and aid each other out of sin.

My "friends" might fade away,
but my friend helps me climb the steep.
All of my friends are shallow,
but my only friend is deep.

Comments

[Sluty Black Bird]

deep man its deep 5/5 i wanna see more of this stuff out of you k man

[messy midori]

I like it. I really like stanza number 3. Makes a lot of sense. Lol

[Buttercup Veela]

yep, thats one of the things i always say: "move on" cuz that is all u really need 2 do if ur depressed (optimism! 4laugh ) and ull always have me as a friend!

[Daddy Got This Account]

i love it, i feel like that too. ^^ my fave. stanza is.... number 2. that is the stanza that is most like me. i must hide my tears with a fake smile so they wont pry at me. great job on this poem, keep it up, i wanna read more! ^^ 1000/5