Never woke up

• Artist: darkforest904
• Description: One day I fell asleep and I never woke up......
• Date: 04/11/2009
• Tags: never woke

One day I fell asleep,
and I never woke up.
And in my dream there was a fairy,
and she was holding a flower.

And she was soooo pretty,
but then she opened up her whole head and she ate the flower!
But she was still hungry,
and I know because she turned her head and she looked at me.

And I knew then that she was going to eat me,
but I was faster and I ran and ran and ran.
Only she ran and she ran and she ran,
after me!

And all the time she was getting bigger with scary teeth,
and I thought "Aren't fairys supposed to be tiny?"
Then suddenly she was gone,
along with everything but the forest.

And I was very scared even more then I was with the fairy,
because whatever was waiting for me in my dream forest wasn't hungry.
But it was waiting for me,
anyway!

One day I fell asleep,
and I never woke up!

Comments

[4Shame]

At first I was pretty skeptical about this since it seemed well bad. However, as it progressed it became much more interesting. I'm actually extremely impressed by this poem! I commend you!

[hikari megumi 15]

hm.... it's good... for a start of free verse.

[WolfFire33]

i really like it, but the exclamation points seem weird in it. i suppose it's supposed to be sad, but the exclamation points make it less sad than it's supposed to be.... 4/5