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Perfect Moment
I travel across my yard the moonlight lighting my way
And see her waiting for me under the tall oak tree
My hand goes through her silky midnight black hair
And her walnut brown eyes stare back into mine
Our heartbeats speeds along with the breeze
I can hear that our breathing is coming in sharp wisps
And see her smile at me making me feel dizzy
My hand pulls her face closer to mine
And her smooth soft lips kiss mine back
Our perfect moment under the night sky
- by Rogue Snowball |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/11/2009 |
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- Title: ~Our Perfect Moment~
- Artist: Rogue Snowball
- Description: I wrote this poem down after I had a dream about a girl I had a major crush on. I hope all of you like it!
- Date: 04/11/2009
- Tags: perfect moment
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Okamisama101 - 06/19/2010
- Great use of imagery words, it actually felt as if the poem came to life. well done 5/5
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- DooMee5 - 05/18/2009
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Nice Poem ^_^
I wrote a poem for the one i love ^_^ - Report As Spam
- Rogue Snowball - 04/11/2009
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Thank you I'm glad you like! xD
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- Bainwen - 04/11/2009
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That's really sweet.
I wish more guys that I know were like you. That would actually express their feelings.
Good job! smile - Report As Spam