My Beloved

• Artist: TheSpaceSubmarine
• Description: A little poem I made on 25/12/2008.
• Date: 04/11/2009
• Tags: beloved dark angel

You are so cold, hold me.
Don't let me fly away.
I need you.
I need you.
Give me your troubled lips.

I wont let you die.
At least not as long as i'm with you.

Let's not let despair set us apart.
I need you.
My beloved Dark Angel.

A tear of blood will make our wishes come true.
It's not the time to run away my beloved.
It's the time to fight back.
The angels that stole our place that we belong to.

It's time to end the chaos in our lives.
We are in front of the gates of Heaven.
We pray at God to let us please live a normal life.
Set us free.
So we can live oncemore a peacefull life.

Amen.

Comments

[SuchSweetSorrows]

well honesty i liked it it was very good

[4ever_lost in_ ur eyes]

duh you would say the same thing twice as repition, a poetic device. i personally think its good 4/5

[TheSpaceSubmarine]

I don't know.I just felt like it.

[Katiestarr]

I am telling the truth i really dont like it 1/5
it sounds like a song more than a poem
like why would you say the same thing twice in a row??