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Crush by Tenten
You are near
I feel it
Steadily closer
My heart beats faster
A scent so familiar
Fills my nose
I inhale
Trembling
Electricity fills me
You glance my way
And smile
That smile I know
So well
I look down
My cheeks burn
Red, blushing rosy
Red
Your mouth moves
But I don't hear a word
Dizzying, intoxicating
Your hand touching my face
You ask me
If I feel alright
I say yes
Do I?
- Title: Crush- A Nejiten Poem
- Artist: iTenny
- Description: A poem I wrote for Nejiten. Enjoy and please rate!
- Date: 04/12/2009
- Tags: naruto couples nejiten
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Rose of Hope - 05/28/2009
- This is good! Even though it isn't particularly NejiTen, it can practically be used for any pairing or romance. But still, this is a nice little piece. 4/5. Very good, but nothing completely OUTSTANDING! Still, it's a nice read, and I liked it. ^^
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- Sukuhi - 05/05/2009
- Great. I love it when I find poems that don't rhyme. Especially when they're decent. Like yours, for instance. 5/5, of course. It had a nice rhythm to it when I read it aloud.
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- Teh Saku - 04/13/2009
- OMG! tenten, this is so good! I love it. 5/5!
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