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Have you ever wondered why there are things we can't keep
And we fall from pressure and we sink so deep
Look at me, look at the way I was seated
I've been given a good life by the way that I was treated
I can't think , my mind's been restricted
But somehow I figured what I just depicted
To me you're a puppet, I control you in every way
I'm a strange phenomena that can't be explained
Yes, I am different in every way
I stay true, I'm cool, I rule
I'ma be me, you see you know how I do
My intellect is smart, yes one to be respected
Im'a good grader, I can take you all for granted
Can you find the meaning hidden inside of this song?
I bet the thoughts developing inside your mind is wrong
I'm not a maniac, nor even close to wretched
It's just with my conscious, my flow can't be contested
Nevertheless, it can't be corrected
Haters gonna think that it should be neglected
And a year later it's gonna be defected
Only because commoners like hypes gonna kill it
Then it won't be inspirational good music
No, I'm going to create a good movement
And show the fake rappers how to do this
If only I can be a sensation
I could have my ideas travel all over the nation
My mind floats like an extra-terrestria
I've even been called a philosopher
Understand just a little bit
If i were to philosophy this
Do you think your mind can handle it?
- Title: Phenomena
- Artist: lilandrez
- Description: 7th Rhyme. And you know what's amazing, people can rate, but they don't leave any insight. Or they read one thing, and not the next. It's really surprising. But whatever, this is my next edition, I will call it a composition after 20 rhymes, but I would like for someone to do artwork for a heading for these rhymes.
- Date: 04/14/2009
- Tags: phenomena junior lilandrez music lyrics
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Comments (7 Comments)
- agnaljoe - 09/20/2009
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Quench my thrist for passion,
Bathe me with your sweat,
Satisfy my desire, and...
Inflame me with your lust.
Hand over your heart, body and mind
So that I may bound your soul to mine;
So that you will never escape my eyes;
So that you will desire only me;
So that you will feel only me;
So that you will see only me;
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- ExplodingPlastic - 09/08/2009
- I like it. Its got a good meaning. Just work a little on the rhyming.
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- Yuffie Kisa - 09/07/2009
- I agree with the two below me.
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- Fireclawx - 08/20/2009
- i would need to agree with atomic rock but she/he took the words right out of my mouth
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- Atomic Rock - 08/19/2009
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It's got a great meaning, yet I believe it would have been better as a song. It sounds a bit to me, like you're trying to describe todays' ideals of democracy. Well, you got it for the most part. xd
Although, I suggest using less words like "gonna". If you are trying to describe a high-up and powerful politician, give or take, it would set the mood more to use uncommon, regale words. - Report As Spam
- ElectraShocked - 08/18/2009
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you kindof lose the rhyming flow around the middle/end part. But t's still really goood.
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- iiToxicZombie - 08/17/2009
- this was a really amazing song. it made me think and i like that.
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