I'm Sorry

• Artist: JackRabbit247
• Description: I give him, my heart, my love, my all.
• Date: 04/15/2009
• Tags: sorry love marriage together jealousy

I'm sorry for a thousand things
Not sorry for my life
I sorry you were filled with doubt
Not sorry for my strife

I'm sorry for the fight's I've caused
Not for the ones that I'd not.
I'm sorry for when I asked, you paused
Not sorry that you're HOT.

I'm sorry for the hate toward me
Not for what I give back
I'm sorry for the ones before me
Not sorry I took their spot... lol.

I'm so sorry If your feelings change
because of what I've done
Not sorry for how I react,
I consider you my number one.... two

I'm sorry for the feelings hurt
And others were confused
Not sorry for the love we made
It's for our hearts to choose.

I'm sorry we're so far apart
Not sorry for it all
I'm sorry that much time has lapsed
Not sorry for how we fall

I'm sorry for not being sorry
For loving you; my life
I'm sorry for the sorry ones
Cause I'm the one who'll be your wife.

Comments

[JackRabbit247]

there is no such thing as an out dated style... It is no style at all its free verse. Sorry you feel the necessity to rate. Kind of shallow on your part. Poetry has no true form, sorry you can not see that for yourself

[UC Poika]

The rhythm sounds like old fashion poesy barely considered poetic anymore. I didn't read it all. Don't care for the style but hope you mean Jesus. didn't rate it. It's not fair I don't like this style though I have written many with it while learning why I didn't like poetry for I thought that was true poetry. Forgive me?

[JackRabbit247]

ok, whoever to the person who gave it a 2... u r rather bitter.. how about leaving a comment saying y

[blueeyedbeauty93]

brilliant