The game

• Artist: Cherished Christmas
• Description: A poem I wrote on e day, i was bored, Pissed off, and I just let it out. I was being picked at for being different than they want, so I just wrote this on some paper, and It kinda fits how I was feeling that day!
  
  Later that day, it inspired my current avatar!
• Date: 04/16/2009
• Tags: game soul elegant poem insane

"Im Not Insane,
Lets Play A Game,
Lets show them all,
Even Elegance hides some shame,
Dont Be Afraid of what you are,
Because by Far,
We are all Perfection,
In the eyes of our creator,
No matter how tragically Insane you are,
If youre just an Elegant Vigilante,
We are all the same,
Deep, Deep Down,
In a dark void within our bodies,
That we call a Soul"

Comments

[Cherished Christmas]

Thank You All. Comments help me to Improve my work, i also found where it is a little off, it changes the storyline, Ill have to fix that!

Thanks!

[hikari megumi 15]

it's quite confusing. But imporiving is the way to go~! ;3

[Kechero-TheForsakenRose]

There is plenty of emotion about it... Interesting and unique wording... But it's a bit off, in some ways. Very good, though.

[hongkongfuiz1234]

Beautiful work 5/5