not sure

• Artist: drake_odd
• Description: think of name and comment
• Date: 04/18/2009
• Tags: sure

when u look into my eyes do u see the darkness, the hate , the evil of my life

or

do u see the slightest light of hope that my soul will live on and be with the one i love and care for

Comments

[DamusDark]

I liked it.
I'm a writer. But to name it use something along the lines of how you were feeling when you wrote it.
If it helps you could call it My Souls Struggle

[call for lights]

Drake is nice.
Drake has good eyes.
^_^

[THRLZ]

not bad.. i give life to a lot of words (aka poems) but this is ok... not to be mean but you must be a new poet