Am I Forgotten

• Artist: Kauroe
• Description: Am i Forgotten
  I don't act like other people
  And I don't want to
  People don't except me
  But I'm not going to act like them
  People forget that i'm here
  That's what it feels like
  So am I forgotten
• Date: 04/19/2009
• Tags: forgotten

hope you like my poem i have more I'll submit later

Comments

[infinitexcode]

I agree. Some of the piece lacks emotion. You also need to work on getting a flow or rythm down pat. I too right poetry and I wrote a piece called Forgotten. Check it out.

[ll Tears of Joy ll]

Yes
I feel the poem lacks emotion a bit
Nice theme
And you might want to switch them around.
4/5

[DemeaningMeaning]

might want to switch the description with the actual poem...