- hope you like my poem i have more I'll submit later
- Title: Am I Forgotten
- Artist: Kauroe
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Description:
Am i Forgotten
I don't act like other people
And I don't want to
People don't except me
But I'm not going to act like them
People forget that i'm here
That's what it feels like
So am I forgotten - Date: 04/19/2009
- Tags: forgotten
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Comments (3 Comments)
- infinitexcode - 07/28/2009
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I agree. Some of the piece lacks emotion. You also need to work on getting a flow or rythm down pat. I too right poetry and I wrote a piece called Forgotten. Check it out.
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- ll Tears of Joy ll - 04/24/2009
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Yes
I feel the poem lacks emotion a bit
Nice theme
And you might want to switch them around.
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- DemeaningMeaning - 04/19/2009
- might want to switch the description with the actual poem...
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