Broken…

• Artist: lanissi
• Description: poetic intro to some story I made years ago...
• Date: 04/24/2009
• Tags: broken poem short

I stare up at the same night’s sky
It curbs a sad memory in my heart…
It’s cold…
Its unrelenting grip on my heat beats till the wake of dawn
It keeps me in a constant trance…
I am lost in the land of twilight…
It’s dark…
Help me…

Comments

[Delightful_Indigo]

I liked it wish it could paint more of an image in my head. 4/5

[Yutora]

I do not know why, but i do like it in some way.