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You leave with the determination
You will return strong
Pain surrounds and fills my heart
My sense of right and wrong
Dulled
You take part of me with you
the rest, culled
Even though I knew
I still fight the truth
Am I right to do so?
My world dark
My light gone
I just need a spark
But my sight remains forgone
You return
Like you never left
Still I yearn
Why am I so bereft?
You kept your promise
You strengthened
You return with braveness
Yet Istill feel unsettled
You appearance seemed unchanged
But your smile
Your smile holds pain caged
Your heart pile
With scars of sadness
You return the rest of me
And something more
I hesitate to spree
You, more distant than before
I reach and fail to get a hold
I agree
You have returned
You are strong to some great degree
But this discern
It has left me more alone
I don't regret it
You can help those in need
I admit
But don't forget about me
If trouble ever pass
Come back to my arms
And we will surpass the way of harm
And we will last
- Title: With a Hero
- Artist: dollies94
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Description:
I entered this poem into a contest. so i don't know the results. actually i entered the shorter version of this poem. but this one is the long one. i had to shorten it so it reaches the 20 lines limit.
i'm really nervous for the results.
oh and the contest isn't on gaia... haha
anyways i want to know what you guys think.
so please comment. - Date: 04/24/2009
- Tags: with hero
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Comments (1 Comments)
- thrivingtoexist - 05/01/2009
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that is very cool
and is the contest poetry.com because thats just a giant scam
loved your poem 5 stars all the way! - Report As Spam