Your Wish

• Artist: 1DAKOTA SMITH1
• Description: well this is my first time ever posting in the arina so please remembe i'm still very new to this. i'm also new to writeing poetry so any helpful advice is greatly apreciated so PLEASE COMMENT and tell me what you think ^_^. i also want to apoligise for any spelling errors(i'v never been good at spelling T_T). hope you all enjoy ^_^
• Date: 04/30/2009
• Tags: your wish

If you could wish for something,
What would it be?
Something bran new and shining,
Or some sort of catastrophy?

Would you wish for adventur,
Or mabe for peace?
For Excitement and thrills,
Or for some kind of release?

Release from a life stile?
Release from a home?
Release from a person?
Or from being alone?

Would you try to escape,
From the world that you know?
Hope for somthing better?
Refusing to be part of the show?

Well what ever you choose,
An adventure or a release,
Remember this always:
only you know what will bring yourself peace.

Comments

[LOSTSOUL6666 v 2]

i like it a lot and i not all that good at spelling too

[xxblackvenusxx]

Lots of spelling errors as you have mentioned, you might want to check those...otherwise, its pretty good smile

[1DAKOTA SMITH1]

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