Spring!

• Artist: XvBLaZeSaInTvX
• Description: I know alot of people love spring. I do its one step closer into the summer time which everyone loves i hope u guys enjoy this poem. Ehhhhemmmmm here goes!
• Date: 05/03/2009
• Tags: spring summer notcoldanymore

Spring is here Spring is here
It is getting nice and clear
The sun is shining its nice and bright
Now we can ll see the light.
Even though it rain alot, nothing 2 do
you should sometimes enjoy it too.
But dont worry summer is near,
were all going to have a great year
I hope everybody enjoys their spring
so we can all here the wind sing.
THE END
-DaGaMeR15

I hope you all enjoyed this poem
and god bless every1

Comments

[ohyeahyeah64]

yikes some ppl are too critical! if you enjoy writing keep doing it smile do what makes you happy and don't let super critical ppl make you feel bad about yourself! smile

[Llywelyn Fawr]

Since you posted this poem, I have to be honest. It was immature, pathetic, and childish. The rhymes sound forced. Poetry doesn't necessarily rhyme. In fact, many contemporary poets are not rhyming. If you want to rhyme, here is the #1 rule: MAKE IT SOUND NATURAL.