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the flame of my love for u
will never flicker out,
my love for you is without a doubt.
my love for you, is like forest fire,
so be my trees, and fuel my desire.
you're like oxygen
i need you bad.
my desperation for you'r love,
is truly sad.
so when you said we need a break,
it must be an obvious mistake!
you're not thinking rationally,
you're obviously wrong!
but baby through this storm we can be strong.
baby,
we cant be fallling apart.
cuz you'r the only person
i'll let in close proximity of my heart.
you're the key to this fragile land,
what part of,
I ******** LOVE YOU!!!
don't you understand.
this break is stupid!
strictly absurd,
i wont hear what you say,
i wont comprehend a single word.
i'll die if you leave me,
what am i to live for?
you're my dream come true,
the wish i wish upon a star.
my world is breaking,
about to collapse
you must be ******** stupid,
if u think i'll let you lose from my grapse!!
please hold me,
look into my eye,
tell me you love me before i die.
cuz each step you take, is slowly tearing me apart
each step you take drives a drill through my already fragile heart...
it stings a little bit
but seems to ease the pain,
so i let blade come in contact with skin again.
blood is flowing,
mind slowly going,
sadly very sadly i'm dying.
there's a lump in my throat,
but i dont feel like crying...
as darkness fall silently
i saw you'r face,
when darkness took me quietly,
i felt you'r embrace...
so when you feel that chill,
i;m with you still.
when you hear that whisper,
i'm never far
i'm at you'r side where ever you are...
- Title: crazy love
- Artist: kannair
- Description: read and comment on my poetry
- Date: 05/05/2009
- Tags: crazy love pane
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Comments (3 Comments)
- tyichi - 05/08/2009
- um..that was crazy love!
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- The Desolate Sonata - 05/06/2009
- Use good grammar and it will be even better.
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- davethedestroyer - 05/06/2009
- wow thats awsome dude
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