My love

• Artist: xallas
• Description: This is dedicated to my beautiiful sweet girlfriend.
• Date: 05/05/2009
• Tags: love

It's simple
It's complex
The word love
The emotion boundless
I cant describe it
But I have so much
I love you that's simple
The amount is endless
It cant be expressed in words
Writing is a stretch
I love you that's complex
I love you
That is true

Comments

[Penultimate Penance]

Too icky for my taste personally, it's an over-done topic. There is a punctual error present in the fifth line, this is poetry - so, you might as well try making it correct throughout.

[BlueMoonHuntress]

5/5,from my experience, its sweet, and a girl would be lucky if a guy wrote a poem for her

[Confizzled_Claustrophobic]

There are too many poems like this. 1/5. The word love is descriptionless, we all know it. It's great that you love your girlfriend, but give me reasons why. I need a good, complex poem if you love her that much.

[xallas]

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