War

• Artist: khawk622
• Description: Hey, bub. Yeah, you. Think I copied this? Think AGAIN! Yeah, I wrote this and there's no denying it!
• Date: 05/06/2009
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I stand alone facing the wind,
looking around me.
My black whip shines in the moonlight.
I watch the horror going on around me,
Thinking, "What have I done?"
My name you ask?
My name is War.
I am the one who caused the clashing of swords,
the crackling of bombs...and worse.
Even I mutter my own name as if it were a curse.
War, War.
I have caused the the white reapers of night to come
and come again.
I am not the night in shining armor,
I am the one who killed him.
I watch as the battlefield is littered with blood.
I listen as the wind whispers, "Death..."
Then I go.
I have business elsewhere.
I have more lives to ruin.

Comments

[blas85]

wow its awsome.

[poor_unfortunet_soul]

Damn... This is awsome! This is really good! You should keep on writing.. This is your talent, love!

[EMMERSZZ]

woahhhh

[Sparky328]

you have skillz, man! i hate those people who think you copy something just because its totally awesome. dont worry, this is so original. only idiots would think that. great job *****

[Dathe_Lervt]

amazing beautiful lovely you have a wonderful imagination

[LexyCobriana]

Wow. I like this. Very original. I'ma have to give that a 5/5. Keep writing. You definately have talent.

[Sonata of the Damned]

Wow, that is amazing. Comment back? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101465079