Cheating Death

• Artist: Bleach_Fangirl
• Description: Just a poem that I wrote to go with a story that I am in the process of writing. I hope you like it. It may be a little bit confusing because it sort of follows the story that is not finished yet... O.o
• Date: 05/07/2009
• Tags: cheating death

I escaped Death today
Three times He missed His mark
Although I believe tonight He just may
Hit me while it is still dark

I ducked the speeding bullet
I leapt over the chemical flames
I raced passed the bus' path

Death was thrice cheated on this day
So why is it that I stay?

Comments

[The Daft Bat]

Its kind of hard to follow, but you did say that it was written to go along with a story you are currently writing so I can't really complain about that... Not that I am looking for a reason to complain. I mean I really do think that it sounds interesting. When you do finish that story let me know. I would love to read it. You know what, if you want, I would even love to edit your story... Well, if I have the time to... But now I am just rambleing... And I think I just spelled that wrong.