I'm Sorry :(

• Artist: PoeticWindstorm
• Description: im very upset........i wanna cry........so i dont care wat anyone thinks.....please enjoy......... :(
• Date: 05/08/2009
• Tags: sorry apologies

"I'm sorry sad "

I'm sorry that I hurt you, I'm sorry I acted like I didn't care, I hadn't known what I had done, Hurting you was like havin no air. I know you've forgiven me already, But my guilt still lingers there, And no one knows how much I love you, And I know that most don't care. I know your fresh wounds have been reburned, To the core, and most others stare, But I'll pick you up and dust you off If even you don't want me there. And should you say that I'm not needed, I wont simply stare, I'll hug you and say "No regrets; but its just the way I am, I'm hollow as thin air."

Comments

[Inyuashi 23]

Ouch...that description..
Well anyways...
This one is a lovely poem, I really do like the last few lines (really, this is where enter would have come in handy like I said).
And to top it all off, you end with a simile.
It's lovely, keep doing stuff like this, poems that come from your feelings and something you're passionate about.
Love really is something wonderful to get your inspiration from.

Also...You've improved, that's good to see.