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A vibrant glaze slips upon the busy hillside
Blowing a blue chill like notes from an angry Saxaphone
Upon the unsespecting hollow heart world
Hunkering down the brown leaf child of fall
And causing a pond frog to scream
His protest at the dormant mud
And with a simple dark shade
Closes the lid
Closes the winterscape
Closes the world
For now.
- by Undead King Suiyex-Sama |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/18/2009 |
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- Title: Winterscape
- Artist: Undead King Suiyex-Sama
- Description: sorry its been a while... been kinda busy, but here ya go, got the muse for this while reading Dune... lol...
- Date: 05/18/2009
- Tags: winterscape frog fall winter saxaphone
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Undead King Suiyex-Sama - 05/21/2009
- Hmm.. I dunno what happened... i just write what's in my head at the time, i don't sit to think... i actually had to edit it cause i mispelled a bit... xD
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- kuddly_kirara - 05/20/2009
- I love your writing and i love you!!!
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- kuddly_kirara - 05/20/2009
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smile angry saxes.... lol
so yeah, this one is pretty good.
winter
snow
hail
etcs
so anyways this one is well thought out and very diverse - Report As Spam
- Tiej - 05/20/2009
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i was so amazed...
first four lines were outstanding 0.o 5/5
but then your poem began to shift its line of description to something completely different
WHAT HAPPENED!!!
ending very dissapointing
but beginning VERY professional and inspiring
over all 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Undead King Suiyex-Sama - 05/18/2009
- Argh... want to edit it so here goes....
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