Heart-ache

• Artist: Ivy-Lierre
• Description: T-T Just something I came up with in a sleepy daze of sadness.....
• Date: 05/25/2009
• Tags: heartache

Heart-ache
By: Naomi Witten

My heart is full of pain and saddness,
A sadness that wont go away,
I try to hide it but,
Somehow you see it anyway,

The loneliness is killing me,
I dont wish to be alone,
But when your near my heart-aches,
For I know you could never be mine,

My mind says to run,
But I cant help but stay,
My heart says to stay,
But I cant help to run,

I sit here thinking of you,
And I cant help it,
Theres no stoping it,
Your there and you wont get out,

I love you,
And I want you to go,
I hate you,
And I want you to stay,

Theres no way to make up my mind,
Your stuck forever in my heart,
And every moment your there your in my mind,
And when you on my mind my heart-aches.

Comments

[Ickylicious]

i'm a little late responding to this but this is good ^_^

[C4NDI KIZZ3Z]

i lovee itt <3

[Eeyore Music Box]

i like it....tis awsome

[Ninja4Panda]

wow....so cool!...i never knew u were that sad....im sorry i couldnt help u much....

[Kurche]

VERY NICE T.T

[heheheh_burn_]

aww =/ didnt kno u really felt like dis ivy *glomps* now u need da glomp!

[ILYSO]

It's alright. Your word play could have been a bit more creative. In a few places the "Your" where you meant 'You are' you should put "You're". 4/5 from me. o.o