you and i

• Artist: silvercourage
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• Date: 05/29/2009
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You and i
Were ment to be
Like a butterfly in a tree
Owwwowww
You and i
Were ment to be
I don’t know
But let us fly and see
Owwwowww

123
Let us be
Come on now
Abc
Lets see
How we may know
Will
Never never never
Never
Owowowowow

How do they know are secrets
How can I ever dream
Is this my destiny
Or am I in my destiny

Owowowowow
You and i
Were ment to be
Like a butterfly in a tree
Owwwowww
You and i
Were ment to be
I don’t know
But let us fly and see
Owwwowww

Bird, bumble bee
Airplane, jet thing
Now do know what I love to sing

Every moment
One more second
Stop the time
Ive been waiting for this all my life
Owowowow
You and i
Were ment to be
Like a butterfly in a tree
Owwwowww
You and i
Were ment to be
I don’t know
But let us fly and see
Owwwowww

Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwowwwwwwwwwwww
Owowowowo
Ooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooowwwwwwww
Yeah
Uhhh
I hear it
Do know it

Like a round ball
Like a man who stands up tall
Like a silly duet
Or a big fluffy pet
Microscope
Or maybe something I don’t know

Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwowwwwwwwwwww
wwooooooooooooooooooo
Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwowwwwwwwwwwwwww
Woooooooooooooooooooooo

You and i
Were ment to be
Like a butterfly in a tree
Owwwowww
You and i
Were ment to be
I don’t know
But let us fly and see
Owwwowww

Stop now
Hear that
Go forward
Or be dead around
Go
Stop
Go stop
Noooooooooooooooowwwwwww
You and i
Were ment to be
Like a butterfly in a tree
Owwwowww
You and i
Were ment to be
I don’t know
But let us fly and see
Owwwowww

Let us be

Comments

[Goaterfellen]

OWOWOWOWOW

[E d i b l e F l o w e r]

The line "like a butterfly in a tree" makes no sense and does not hold any figurative value, but since its a song... whatever.

You need to either capitalize all of the i's or none of them, not just a few here and there. Also, using "abc" and "123" detracts greatly from the whole, because those are both heavily overused.

And it's "meant," not ment. Aside from all that, it was okay. I liked the lines "Like a round ball
Like a man who stands up tall
Like a silly duet."

[Morning Maple]

I like it, don't really understand the "owws"