On the Precipice of Goodbye

• Artist: Bonne Fire
• Description: My 2nd Poem in English, hope you like it.
• Date: 05/29/2009
• Tags: precipice goodbye bonne fire

Just lay down here, near by,
Don't dare to think I'll let you die.
I'll warm your body with all my heart,
I will make your bloody tears into real art.

I want to say so many things to you right now,
I want to tell you but I don't know how.
I don't want to loose any hope but I'm scared I will,
I'm afraid to keep it inside; I don't want to be ill…

Just lay down here, near by,
Don't dare say those things, don't dare say goodbye,
I shall make all your crazy dreams come true,
And if you go… I'm coming with you.

Comments

[Its Riri]

it's just so good. . like being afraid of losing someone they really care of.. and would do anything for that someone just to be with him or her. at first it was like, that's person's gonna die or sumthin'. . it was just breathtaking.

[April_Showers94]

OMG, i love it!!!... It describes so much how i felt when my friend passed away. i saw him get hit by a car, and well... this says it alll.