Push Away (Demo)

• Artist: Zuhukanah
• Description: I call this a demo because I don't know if I'll be able to continue it. It was a song I wrote as a test, I'm trying to add music to it using Noteworthy Composer and Fruity Loops Studio, combining and editing in Adobe Soundbooth. It will be the first song with actual lyrics that I published if I succeed. Wish me luck ;)
• Date: 06/05/2009
• Tags: push away demo leave sorrow

Enigmatic dust surrounds you
In a metallic hue, reflecting the moon.
I need to help you and try to get along
But it doesn't really help me if you don't tell me what's wrong.
Instead I run in circles, wasting my time
Just trying to figure out what's going on in your mind
But I don't find the answers, so I'm forced to retreat
From the heat, the concrete streets, and the defeat.
In the midst of retreat I decide to turn around
From the pain and sorrow of the day, and I found
The dust that surrounded you is going away
And it depletes more the farther that I stay
So I guess that I was just no help to you at all
I get closer by pushing away...



I get closer by pushing away....

Comments

[Nemone]

I like it so far. Good luck making it into a song. I hope it turns out well.