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With a dollar in my pocket and a coupon unused,
I set on my quest to find me some food. cheese_whine
I searched for a place that was cheap and to go,
And then I found it, my beloved Taco. idea
It was crunchy and chewy, beefy, cheesy and sweet, 4laugh
I loved it so much my delicious treat. heart
I walked down the road my taco in hand, arrow
And them came along the towns marching band. dramallama
I stepped off the road but not quick enough, eek
In one beat of a drum, my taco was crushed. xp
I wept for some time, then my stomach growled,
I was once again time for some yummy chow. cheese_whine
At once i remembered the taco that had fell, gonk
And so I headed back to Taco Bell. mrgreen
- by Dolly567567 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/09/2009 |
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- Title: Ode to my Taco
- Artist: Dolly567567
- Description: Who said poems couldn't be funny?
- Date: 06/09/2009
- Tags: taco
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Arthur Dent Needs Tea - 01/14/2019
- LOVE it.
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- Xaldin69 - 06/11/2009
- u kik @$$!
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- MicahMarie - 06/10/2009
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hahah thats really great. i love funny poems. totally random, yet great. (:
excellent job. - Report As Spam
- pekuliar rabbit - 06/10/2009
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poems can always be funny^^
suggestions:
"I loved it so much, my delicious treat" (add comma)
"I walked down the road, my taco in hand," (add comma)
"I stepped off the road, but not quick enough" (add comma)
"I(t) was once again time for some yummy chow" (did you mean it?)
commas are for where you should pause when you are speaking and in my humble opinion they might go well in those places. completely up to you if you want to change it or not. all in all it is a great poem. It made me laugh biggrin - Report As Spam
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