Sakura

• Artist: Ichi Nakahara
• Description: I originally did this poem for my english class, but I like it so I wanted to post it. As you will soon tell when you begin to read, I am completely obsessed with going to Japan! ^_^ I Want to go there some day soon! The assignment was to use a poem called "The next poem I write" And use those words in your poem, but make it completely your own. May sound a little confusing, but You'll understand once you read hopefully ^_^;
• Date: 06/11/2009
• Tags: sakura japan

Sakura

The next poem I write will have cherry blossoms
Surrounding it, blossoms so perfect
I can't even begin to fathom. My love will lean against
The tree and whisper in my ear, "Aishiteru
Itsumo demo zutto." The next poem
Will have music in it, too, and all the symbolic instruments
In the entire country of Japan; and a beautiful, lush
Garden Stretching for miles throughout a forest.
The next poem will have a temple
And a statue of Buddha, Glorious and giant,
Ancient markings and incense burning bright,
Lillies and wild flowers surrounding the deck.
There'll be a priest praying in the next poem;
And a festival where Golden
Kimono girls dance in tune with one another.
Oh, The next poem I write will be gracious!
But there won't be any crying in that poem,
I'll learn to be strong.

Comments

[shesheli]

wow nice

[faux_fur_rabbit]

i like ti, it's really good. 5/5.

[Ichi Nakahara]

You could definatly say that! I can't even explain how badly I want to go to Japan!

[XxNamikaze_MinatoxX]

Nyah~ I understand now... Your longing to go to Japan is making you cry while writing! The poems nice yeah~!