Rap verse 1

• Artist: wilder17
• Description: my friend thought it would be a good idea to challenge me to a rap off. i beat him but our raps were not originals. he was mad and called for a rematch which has yet to take place. i decided to write an original rap for this one. this is only the first verse and i just want to know what you think of it please comment, (and yes i know the last 4 words are from a movie, i don't remember which, but it rhymed well.)
• Date: 06/16/2009
• Tags: verse rapper wilder17

Hey man you keep saying that i can't rap, but i'm gonna make yours sound like crap.

keep sayin' that you can rap like a pro, i'm just gonna say that you spit like a ho.

you may be tall, dark, and handsome but i'm short, white, and charge ransom

when i steal your hearts with my amazing rap, you very well might need a map,

so that you can find your way back, man maybe you should do some crack,

and hope that someone has got your back.

but now i've dropped my rap and whitey just struck back.

Comments

[0DD_S3X]

rlli cool rap, heheh "you may be tall dark and handsome but im short white and charge ransom" !!! love tht part!

[thresholdalchemist7]

DOG DIS RAP IS SICK!!!!

[rAyBaBi223]

kol i like the last line but the other stuff not so much....... :{ check out my raps in the poetry and lyrics

[Xx-NuMbCoMplication-xX]

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