Alt Part 3 - Parted

• Artist: Chemicult
• Description: This is the alternate conclusion to the story. It's a sadder ending. but there are many ways life can go. I think I prefer to count the original ending as true.
• Date: 06/21/2009
• Tags: part parted

She looks out far across the water
He thinks about how long he’s sought her
He wishes he could speak his heart
She wishes they weren’t far apart

She stands up and starts to walk
He stops to rest beside a rock
She’s hoping for a single chance
To be caught within his glance

She sits down beside a stone
Neither wants to be alone
They don’t know that but four feet
Keep them from their destined meet

She lies down to draw a heart
He couldn’t think of what to say
They are once again apart
As he goes his separate way

Comments

[evilangel121234]

GVGHCYIXXCHGBK`CGB THERE'S NO WAY TO DESCRIBE HOW I FELL ABOUT THIS POEM IT'S SOOOOO GOOOOD I WANNA READ ANOTHER LIKE IT!! : )

[arisenfey111]

I like it. Its really good.