Ending of my World

• Artist: P34CH13P00
• Description: I wrote this after I found out my boyfriend was cheating on me... I cried for 4 hours, thought bout killing myself briefly, then wrote this poem. I know its sad and "emo". I'll be honest and tell you, most of my poetry is. If you don't like it I'm asking that you PLEASE don't flame. Thank You!!!
• Date: 06/21/2009
• Tags: pain love

im not strong enough,
i don't know what to do,
i feel the world is fading,
and all i want is you.

the sharp clear pain,
is sure to set me free.
that same pain,
will be the death of me.

im clinging to your picture,
the only thing i see,
is how you seem so happy,
and never needed me.

Comments

[P34CH13P00]

i never honestly intended to kill myself... i have too many people that would kill me if i did o.o well... they said they wouldn't go to my funeral... and i have a lot of good friends that helped me... the guy is just lucky im not like my sis... she's vindictive...and a psych student person... lolz... ^.^ thank you for the feed back!!!!!

[heyyazim]

it's sounded pure...
i'm sorry 4 wht happpen....
stiLL,, life must go ON...!

[Dorklevitz]

omg i feel the same way only with my bff, and i dont mean to be weird. dont call it emo, im sick of "emo" it sounds a bit sad but i think its beautiful. i would give it a 4 but since i love it so much i'll give it a 5 ^-^ dont kill yourself, he's obviously not worth it. <3 <3 <3