Ill Help You To The Light.

• Artist: Daddy Got This Account
• Description: to my friend 290DarkStars. ^^ hope you like it.
• Date: 07/01/2009
• Tags: help light

Dear, dont be depressed,
I know life is hard,
You and i havent had the best,
But ill hold your hand if you hold mine,
And as friends we can walk to the light together,
If you fall,
Ill catch you,
And i know you would do the same for me.
As you are my friend,
Id do anything to help you through the hell we call life.
And my dearest friend,
Ill lead you to the light,
Take my hand,
Ill help you go through the bumps in the road that we call life.
Ill help you smile,
I love to see you smile.
I would do anything to see my dearest friend smile.
Dear, dont be depressed,
For i will help you smile.

Comments

[makayla_girl995]

there is a thrillion stars out there that you cant tell the difference from but one stands out from the crowd it is you

[3 IVI 0]

I like the message you've put through this. It is a portrayal that can be given to many common problems, but can be made special by a unique problem.

You've got some decent rhymes in here, but I can only place this in a free verse category. I personally don't like free verse due to a common lack of rhyme. Stanzas might work wonders, be it four lines or three. It's all about your comfort.

I see potential in this. Keep writing. I have a feeling you'll write something really wonderful someday.

[290DarkStars]

and I do ^^ right back atcha Luna ^^ ill always help ya if you need it ^^ 5 brzillion/5 ^^