what shall i do

• Artist: xX_black emo girl15_Xx
• Description: this poerty i wrote when i was about to die from pain wish u all love it leave ur comments plz and ur openion thx
• Date: 07/02/2009
• Tags: thankyou

What shall i do!
Full of pain
Full of hurt
No one feels me

What shall i do!
All the pepole telling me that they love me
But is this true?
Or they are lying on me
They r pretending and showing alot of faces
Why?

What shall i do!
All the world coming black opposite my face
All the world turning hell & black
&
Im asking for help
No one replays
No one is here
No one hear my calling
Like all pepole become deaf

What shall i do!
Im stuck in this black dark world alone
Alone stuck in the darkness
Full of pain and hurt

What shall i do!
Im searching for place no......
No pain,no hurt,no tears,no dark
Searching for someone to pull me out from this hell
All pepole seemed not caring for me any more

What shall i do!
Now im nth
Now nothing in my hands
Just tear r falling from my eyes
And im waiting to die
Im now the angel of hell xp T.T

Comments

[zcbm282]

love it biggrin

[ED0GAWA C0NAN]

it's great.
very appealing. keep up the good work

[hannahmontana the queen]

good poytry i love her u r the bust love u sis se u later on new poytry love u

[sweetstrawberryslice]

good work my dear u know i dnt leave comment but its just 4 u biggrin

[Meepa_chan_is_a_MW]

nice poem, i like how you put soul into it. the words seem to speak. its nice good job.

[Good King Gerbilwits]

yara....

[Tailwinder]

love it! 5/5